Art What I'm cooking - NED/Momotaro art

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French
Yo ! L'histoire commence. Videl's Chapter est lancé !
La 1ère page est en ligne.

Rendez-vous sur mon Twitter pour lire les pages.
twitter.com/MomotaroComics

English
Hey ! The story begins. Videl's Chapter is launched!
1st page is online. (TRANSLATION IS COMING SOON)

See you on Twitter to read the pages.
twitter.com/MomotaroComics

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Good news and congratulations for this nice start! Do do you plan a number of pages to make? If so, how many?

I hope there'll be funny moments and (a) charismatic bad guy(s) to beat. 😀

I look forward to reading next pages anyway!
You can take your time for translating :p
 
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16-bit Fighter said:
Good news and congratulations for this nice start! Do do you plan a number of pages to make? If so, how many?

I hope there'll be funny moments and (a) charismatic bad guy(s) to beat. 😀

I look forward to reading next pages anyway!
You can take your time for translating :p
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Thansk a lot!
Not a very long story. As you know I have a bigger main project I postponed for years because I was too busy with IRL + Mugen + Openbor projects.
Basically 10 pages (counting intro-cover + outro page)
There is a big guy to beat but no real main enemy. In a short story, it's hard to come up with such characters.
This is and original character but he can be included in original story with no "paradox."

English is almost done.

I'm getting some help for japanese version as well :)
(even if the reading is from left to right)
 
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NED said:
Basically 10 pages (counting intro-cover + outro page)
There is a big guy to beat but no real main enemy. In a short story, it's hard to come up with such characters.
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Since it's a DBZ story, I thought it was maybe a 18-paged comic. ^^
Yes, 10 pages doesn't allow to show much apart from your comic book skills (which is your plan anyway).

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This is and original character but he can be included in original story with no "paradox."
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20 years ago I imagined a story after the first dragon balls quest and only with OC (ok except Shenron ^^). At the end a sect made the moon return thanks to a wish. If I'm right there wasn't paradox either.
I never started drawing the comic but I drew some characters.

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I'm getting some help for japanese version as well
(even if the reading is from left to right)
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So cool! 🇯🇵
 
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16-bit Fighter said:
Since it's a DBZ story, I thought it was maybe a 18-paged comic. ^^
Yes, 10 pages doesn't allow to show much apart from your comic book skills (which is your plan anyway).


20 years ago I imagined a story after the first dragon balls quest and only with OC (ok except Shenron ^^). At the end a sect made the moon return thanks to a wish. If I'm right there wasn't paradox either.
I never started drawing the comic but I drew some characters.


So cool! 🇯🇵
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Interesting ! So you actually created alternate story and characters !
To me this is the first in DBZ universe ^^;

I have a limited number of pages of course. But more pictures by page (8-10 I think, instead of 4-5 in usual manga)
Hardcore DB/manga fans can be disapointed ^^;

About Japanese audience, It's just my curiosity to see if Japanese people are more receptive than others about a Videl story instead of the usual Goku-Vegeta-Broly-(Gohan) stuff than every usual fanboy want. But I really have some interesting people starting to follow my work. Just not much feedback...
 
NED said:
Interesting ! So you actually created alternate story and characters !
To me this is the first in DBZ universe ^^;
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I don't think alternate is the right word since it happens in the same timeline. I'd say a complementary story that allows to discover why the moon destructed by Kamé Sennin in the first story-arc is here again in the 2nd one.

NED said:
I have a limited number of pages of course. But more pictures by page (8-10 I think, instead of 4-5 in usual manga)
Hardcore DB/manga fans can be disapointed ^^;
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My comics teacher said the more a comic-book has pages including strips with at less three pictures the best it is. (y)
After all, we talk about sequential art!

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About Japanese audience, It's just my curiosity to see if Japanese people are more receptive than others about a Videl story instead of the usual Goku-Vegeta-Broly-(Gohan) stuff than every usual fanboy want. But I really have some interesting people starting to follow my work. Just not much feedback...
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I wish you had little by little more and more feedbacks and not from gagaballiens (french word for DBZ fanboys, you know it but I explain for the others ^^)! Hey, it comes to me that I know a little an admin of the French DBZ's wiki and DBZ's podcaster. I can as of now talk about your work or delay it before there are more pages. As you want. ;)
 
machok said:
no one here guessed correctly?
so it's cammy.. I feel dumb 🤣
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No problem. It was not that easy, It could have been almost any girl, and I removed the scar and mouth in the sketch to make it harder to quess. :)
I's some kind of reference to her SSF2 ingame portrait.
 
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